上周的雅思纸笔考试中,出了一篇关于城市居民缺乏锻炼的报告类作文题目。
今天长沙申友雅思黛西请申友雅思的Effy老师给我们具体讲解一下,这类作文题目的解题思路以及范文分享。
It is difficult for people living in cities to get enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what solutions can be taken to solve the problem?
生活在城市的人很难得到足够的体育锻炼。原因是什么?有什么措施可以解决这个问题?
文章可分4段,主体段一段讲causes, 一段讲solutions,加上开头和结尾。
这道题目难易程度适中,大家可以先思考一下城市里人们缺少锻炼的原因,Effy老师建议从以下几点分析:
接下来就是针对以上分析的原因,提出相应的解决方案:
让居民改变生活习惯,合理安排时间,主动放下电子设备,多出门活动。
政府和社区应该修建更多的公园和运动设施,让人们有地方进行体育锻炼。
以下是Effy老师给出的范文,黛西建议看范文之前可以先尝试自己思考一下,写一下,再和老师的范文进行对比,找出自己没有思考到或是不足的地方。
We see a falling number of urban citizens engaged in physical exercises these days. It is essential to understand the major causes behind this phenomenon and work out the solutions to reverse the trend, as physical exercise plays a crucial role in a healthy life.
The reasons can be multifarious. Firstly, people often lead a busy lifestyle and experience great pressure from work and daily chores, having no time to do the workouts. In the daytime, they work or study under enormous pressure: students are crammed with knowledge of different subjects, group discussions, as well as endless assignments while workers are tied up to multi-tasks, deadlines, and projects. As a result, when they want to take a break away from their busy life after a prolonged day, they do not retain much stamina and energy to participate in sports in the evening. In addition, the ubiquity of electronic devices, such as smartphones or tablets, allure people to lead a sedentary lifestyle. What people prefer in the spare time is to just lie flat on their sofas and read the social media feeds or watch short videos on their mobile phones, which can offer them more instant gratification and exhaust less energy than doing exercises.
In response to such a phenomenon, I believe a few measures can be taken to address these issues. The most effective one is for the government to regulate the working hours and prohibit working overtime and so that the city-dwellers are given more sufficient free time to maintain an active lifestyle. Another solution is to launch the awareness campaign to inform people of the detrimental effects of sedentary lifestyle and the benefits of doing work out. Moreover, governments can construct ample fitness facilities in the parks of communities, providing people with easy access to physical exercises. Last, governments can take advantage of celebrities’ influence and set a good example for the general public. A perfect case in point involves a fitness instructor who has recently triggered a fitness craze across China to encourage people to follow him doing fitness exercises on the livestreams every evening. His livestream videos are also widely spread by state media which also want to advocate a healthy lifestyle among people anxiously.
The problem of lacking sufficient exercise could have a long-term impact on a person’s life, and to change this situation, both individuals and the community need to take effective actions.
黛西温馨提示,平时看范文的时候,一定要注意总结词汇和句式,真正吸收了才是有效的备考哦。
久坐的生活方式
a sedentary lifestyle
从忙碌的工作中抽身休息
take a break away from work
体力、耐力
stamina
及时满足
instant gratification
城市居民
urban citizens, city dwellers
健身设施
fitness facilities
引发健身热潮
trigger a fitness craze
提倡健康的生活方式
advocate a healthy lifestyle
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